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Post by Leone19 on Sat Dec 28, 2013 3:30 pm

This isn't near complete. I just posted it to open some discussion on this new board.


Lightning Dravise Article [DRAFT]



Lightning Dravise is a rapid fire type B-Daman part of the change core system. It was released in Japan on October 2, 2010 and then later releases August 1, 2013 throughout the world with a Tornado Magazine instead of just the starter in the Japan release.

The body set of this B-Daman in Dravise.

Head



The head features a dragon-like design, complementing the fact that it's part of the Legendary Dragons. There is what appears to be a helmet with a horn sticking outwards. It has eye stickers that are highly anime influenced shown by the shape. It also has stickers on the top ipart of the head that are black with small red marks. Rev Dravise, the Takara Tomy version, has checkered like stickers instead.
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Re: (Tri's Draft)

Post by Thunder Dome on Tue Jan 07, 2014 7:30 pm

Looks good so far. Hopefully Tri will come back and edit it soon. All the wording and grammar look good at the moment as well. I see one typo where it says "ipart" and I'm assuming it is suppose to say "part, but I guess it doesn't matter to much right now.
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